~ ode to the chimney ~

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Author: adgray
Word Count: 96
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It’s always the chimney left standing
long after the house has gone
burnt to the ground or just crumbled to dust
the faithful chimney stands on

Usually first erected
and used every day of it’s life
built to last an eternity
by many a man and his wife

Ironic though that you’ll find
whenever a house burns down
the chimney remains untouched
you can see them all over town

So here’s my ode to the chimney
and blessing the fireplace beneath
long may you cook me my dinner
and give blissful warmth to my feet!

~ ode to the chimney ~

Right across the country paddocks, of here and no doubt anywhere in the world, there are chimneys standing – a memorial to the old homesteads that once stood there!

The wonderful Peter Kurdulija posted a view of this one and these words came to me in memory of all those chimneys and the families who lived by them.
Chookas! ♥

~ ode to the chimney ~ belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Architectural Photography, Australian Landmarks and Icons, Bits and Pieces , Happy Haven, History, Live, Love, Dream, Mature Woman, Outback Australia and The Patchwork
  • amarica

    amarica

    The chimney is like Christ…the foundation cornerstone for warm and comfort. The place to go for nourishment, burning brightly through the darkest night…standing firm against the storms of life….

    Well done my friend!!!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Alyssa, Absolutely beautiful….and Peter’s view is marvelous!!!! Hugs, Sally xxxxxxooooo

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    gorgeous !!

    so true .. this gave me a little chuckle and a warm feet by the fire feeling xx

  • loramae

    loramae

    Still using my chimney :O) Made me smile!

  • Sean Jansen

    Sean Jansen

    Beautiful :)

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    great written piece,dawnx

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    Fabulous!!!

  • papadad

    papadad

    Love this poem so simple yet so true, In Scotland during the clearances the factors burnt the thatched roofs and only the stone walls and the chimney remained, they thought the spirits of the people lived on in the chimney and were never pulled down, great work

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