open eyes
In a translucent sky
phantasmagorical dreams
floating on the waves of cold ethereal streams
symphony of decay
a tributary stream
decaying inner soul areas
never-ending dreams
never-ending task
ghastly moments
ghastly mysteries
on the place beside the never-ending line of time
the life dragged on interminably
a bone of contention between heart and mind
have a bone to pick with life
It’s all been a ghastly mistake?
imprison mind and soul through centuries
the bare bones of time
the bare bones of an agreement
life existed since the dawn of the world
and until the last star fall from heaven
time’s flow emerge with ancient time
focusing on the darkness
following revolution plan
into the eternal wasteland
we more sinned against than sinning
deadly sin beyond forgiveness
swallowed by the darkness
the life defeated by time but one swallow doesn’t make a summer
life’s still bottom of the league
the wind blew through gaps at the top and bottom of the door
the volcano could erupt at any time?
ash began to erupt from the crater
volcanic eruptions
meteoric craters
humans meteoric rise to power
Stem cells produce more cells of the same kind
skin stem cells give rise to skin, and so on
humans insecurities stem from something that happened in their childhood though
but there’s the forgiveness of sins
life emerged from the shadows?
the shadow on the wall
in phantasmagorical dreams
should we focus on the darkness until the day come?
can we focus on the stars until the fall from heaven?
the sky looked at us with intense hatred
eyes filled with fear
I saw the all seas filled with hatred’s desire
so it shows that it’s a time to rise?
rise from ashes..
We searched everywhere but we still couldn’t find it
following revolution plans
We stayed on a path where time has stood still
in the phantasmagorical dreams..
There’s still time to change our mind
there’s a still life
rise from the ashes
I’ve seen the shadow on the wall
time to rise..
a still life!
phantasmagoria
A Still Life !!
Robin Monroe thanks my friend for the an awesome piece of art!!!
VanSnuG
DARKLY BRILLIANT.
Phoenix’s Rising Theme, Love IT.
Ushna Sardar in reply to VanSnuG’s comment
thank you so much Van! especially for the fav!
glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Pet xxx
Oh Ush…this is beautiful! Wow! I must re-read it again to make sure I haven’t missed anything!
Mwa poppet! Xxxx
Ushna Sardar in reply to Pet xxx’s comment
thanks you so much sweet Pet! you are such a darling!
glad you liked!
huggles my friiend!
xoxoxox
Sally Omar
Ushna … An awesome collaboration…Hugs, Sally xxxxooo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment
thank you so much Sal! you are such a sweetheart!
huggles my friend!
xoxoxoxox
Tom Broderick IPA
great work ushna. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment
thanks tom! glad you liked my friend :)
TeriLee
Incredible…..fantastic job!!
Ushna Sardar in reply to TeriLee’s comment
thanks teri hunnie! glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xoxoxoxoxox
Judi Taylor
Ushna, this is amazing and insightful. Love it emensely!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Judi Taylor’s comment
thanks Judi! glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xoxoxoxx
kamel
something mystic really strong
I love especialy the picture great one
Ushna Sardar in reply to kamel’s comment
thanks kamel my friend!
glad you liked!
huggles
kamel
No It’s a good and positive poem with a lot of hope
and even some thruth we don’t won’t to see but we need it
for all us…yes high spirit
RMonroe
Excellent Ushna….I love it:)
navybrat
absolutely incredible!!
Shree
This is simply awesome….the words are mindblowing and the flow is excellent….i was so happy to read this thoughts…well frankly speaking i too have a nice artwork which perfectly suits this poem of yours…..great tallents ushna…anyways i already had send you my new artwork.
kjgordon
Great when two artist collaborate so well….
beast
another great peice ushna with a thought-provoking intensity
devotee1
Great collaboration, Ushna! I love the mysterious and deeply foreboding tone of your poem. And yet lots of positive vibration.
barnsis
Beautifully written, great thoughts and intents. The image fits so well with the words. Well done.
Vulcan
i have to read it again before i can comment
TheWanderingBoo
once again, a wonderful piece of art complemented by your beautiful words, you are such an inspiration…thankyou
Globalphotos
Wow, wonderful :)
linaji
This work is fanstazzzzzzzmic!!
There’s still time to change our mind
there’s a still life
rise from the ashes
I’ve seen the shadow on the wall
time to rise..
a still life!
Good God what a ride to find out there is a Still Life!!!
congrats to you both!!
Prasad
There’s still time to change our mind
there’s a still life
rise from the ashes
I’ve seen the shadow on the wall
time to rise..
a still life!
Incredible words, Ushna!!!!!
Wayne Cook
I cannot believe how entrancing your writing is! Woah! I get sucked in and lose track of time….You say English is your second language?