noisome situations
noisome smells
a constricted vision of the world
political constrictions
constricting rules and regulations
when the sun reclines
the night consumes light
the vast span of geological time
geological epochs
time marked the end of an epoch in the country’s history
a life of depravity
Clandestine democracy

dissenting voices
dissenting views and opinion
political dissent
religious dissent
Diplomacy is better than war ain’t it?
epochs fly
but the problems would be repeated ad infinitum
a primal urge
time is but the stream
fear for the future
a stream through which we crossed
In fetters of time lied a measureless space
a faint string of crimson hue
some clear concise instructions
some narrow victories
some narrow escape
some cosmic plans
some disasters on a cosmic scale
some narrow interests
a very narrow view of the world
it seems that we ignored some important issues
but through storms of cosmic dust we made our way
we reduced the number of possibilities and choices
the time blinded by a thousand dying suns
Exists in the notch
a palpable sense of relief
some obscure reasons
we failed to turn up
we found the way where a million realities exist
we traced our lines of descent from the past!
we have narrowed down the list of personal interests
to bring us back upon ourselves
we have notched up!
there is no more the feeling of constriction in the chest of the world!
the constricted vision of the world has changed
the political constrictions has been virtually eradicated in world.
constriction
depicted future!
I don’t know whether it happens or not! we’ll make it or not, but let’s try anyway!
Constriction it’s utterly beautiful piece of art!
margpie thanks my friend!
linaji
Ohhhh do I love love love this one… the combo of you both is PERRRRRRRFECT!!! FAV FAV FAV!
Ushna Sardar in reply to linaji’s comment
lina thank you so much hunnie! you are such a sweetheart! glad you liked it means a lot! huggles n love from Ushna xoxoxoxox
Paul (Quixote)...
Excellent piece and image, Ushna.
Ushna Sardar in reply to Paul (Quixote) Alleyne’s comment
thank you so much Paul! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! stay in touch!
Pet xxx
Love this!! Great collaboration!!! mwaaaa xxxxx
Ushna Sardar in reply to Pet xxx’s comment
hey long time Pet! how are you? u been good? what have u been up to? missed you my friend! thank you so much! glad you liked! it means a lot hunnie! huggles n love xoxoxoxox
Judi Taylor
Made me think … great piece, Ushna!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Judi Taylor’s comment
thank you so much Judi! it means a lot! huggles my friend xoxoxox
margpie
beautiful work Ushna, I love doing collabs with you :)
Ushna Sardar in reply to margpie’s comment
ditto marina! i love to doing collab with u my friend! you are outstanding artist! love your art! thank you so much! glad you liked! huggles n love xoxoxoxox
N Kumar Bellani
Wonderful…..words and the artwork…I’m a fan of Margpie anyway!
Ushna Sardar in reply to N Kumar Bellani’s comment
thanks Kumar my friend! glad you liked! i love her art too!
appreciate your precious comments! huggles my friend
KEITH R. WILL...
excellent writing again my friend huggles, and then some
Ushna Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment
thank you so much Keith my friend! it means a lot! you are such a darling friend! huggles
devotee1
“a very narrow view of the world
it seems that we ignored some important issues
but through storms of cosmic dust we made our way
we reduced the number of possibilities and choices
the time blinded by a thousand dying suns
Exists in the notch
a palpable sense of relief
some obscure reasons
we failed to turn up
we found the way where a million realities exist
we traced our lines of descent from the past!
we have narrowed down the list of personal interests
to bring us back upon ourselves”
Absolutely beautiful poetry! A brilliant journey, and I also am confident that in time it will all work good for all. But it has been a difficult journey, not at all smooth, and, as you say, much yet to learn in the way of humanity.
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment
yeah I agree Joe, that time will come then we see humanity have taken place! and the political constrictions has been virtually eradicated in world! thank you so much my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend
devotee1
Great collaboration! The artwork is superb. There is a brightness (hopefulness) evident, and also the many twists and turns of reality. I can see the wars and also the love that will heal. Tremendous image!
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment
thank you so much Joe, marina is a very talented artist i love her art work too! no doubt she depicted well! glad you liked that collab! so nice of you! appreciate your precious comments! huggles my dear friend
Wayne Cook
I am not able often to find your poems, but when I do, you never fail to excite images and thoughts. Thoughts that sometimes go against what we’ve been taught, but thought I know, have been carefully constructed in your soul. You do excellent, and sometimes disturbing poetry and it always leaves me wanting more….your work entrances this reader!! Beautifully written, Ushna….You have my admiration!!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Wayne Cook’s comment
thank you so much Wayne my friend! it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Gregory John O...
Nice one
Ushna Sardar in reply to Gregory John O'Flaherty’s comment
thanks Greg my friend!
huggles
judithtaylor
Sensational collaboration.
Congratulations
I love it
Ushna Sardar in reply to judithtaylor’s comment
thanks judi! glad you liked! it means a lot!
huggles my friend!!!
barnsis
very well done, so many thoughts and ideas.
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment
thanks byron my friend!it means a lot
huggles
Del Millar
Brilliant and beautiful Ushna and a great art work.
Ushna Sardar in reply to Del Millar’s comment
thanks Del my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! huggles
Sally Omar
Ushna, Absolutely brilliant…I love it…definite fav…Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment
thanks Sal, you are such a sweetheart! huggles xoxoxox
Jen Whyte
Very thought provoking words my dear … beautifully written!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Jen Whyte’s comment
thanks Jen my friend! it means a lot! huggles
chazz
Great writing….I love reading your work, it’s always so thought provoking.
Ushna Sardar in reply to chazz’s comment
thanks chazz my friend!
it means a lot!
huggles
Symmetry44
Perfectly written Ushna….
Ushna Sardar in reply to Symmetry44’s comment
thanks symmetry! appreciate your precious comments!
it means a lot! stay in touch!